give away a book

[Joe]

I bought a book the other day, and I will give it to a friend. I want to write something at the beginning page, which indicates the sender and receiver. Could I write it like this:

To Susan,

.......(some other message)......

From Joe
Sep. 28, 2004

Is it OK? If not, how should I get it to work? Thanks. :)

[Mister Micawber]

That's just fine, Joe.