please correct this paragraph

[muktha]

hiiiii

I was standing in the courtyard. My brother with his full force pulled me backwards.As I was not ready to give up I used my full force to push myself to the front..Unfortunately I couldn’t balance, my legs got/were slipped and fell down smashing my face against the ground.My face was bleeding.They rushed me to the hospital and I got eight stitches in my forehead.My parents beat my brother for his deed.I felt sorry for him and felt that it was his offday.

Thanks in advance

[Mohammed Abu Risha]

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hiiiii

I was standing in the courtyard. My brother pulled me backwards with his full force. As I was not ready to give up, I used my full force to push myself to the front. Unfortunately, I could not maintain a balance. I slipped and fell down smashing my face against the ground. My face was bleeding. I was rushed to the hospital and got eight stitches in my forehead. My parents beat my brother for what he did to me. I felt sorry for him and felt that it was his off day.

[colloquium]

hiiiii

I was standing in the courtyard. My brother with his full force pulled me backwards.As I was not ready to give up I used my full force to push myself to the front..Unfortunately I couldn’t balance, my legs got/were slipped and fell down smashing my face against the ground.My face was bleeding.They rushed me to the hospital and I got eight stitches in my forehead.My parents beat my brother for his deed.I felt sorry for him and felt that it was his offday.

Thanks in advance

I'm not currently a qualified teacher.

I was standing, impatiently, in the courtyard. My brother, with all his power, pulled me back, but I was not ready to give up. I used everything I had to force myself to the front, though unfortunately, I couldn't balance. My legs slipped and I fell down - smashing my face against the hard ground. My face was bleeding and I was rushed to the hospital where I received eight stiches in my forehead. My parents beat my brother for his misdeed, yet I felt sorry for him. It was not one of his best days.

Maybe I have changed it too much?

[muktha]

Thanks

Is it correct to say

He was standing in front of me.
He was standing back of me

[bhaisahab]

Thanks

Is it correct to say

He was standing in front of me.
He was standing back of me

He was standing in front of me.
He was standing back of me.

He was standing behind me.

[rj1948]

Thanks

Is it correct to say

He was standing in front of me.
He was standing back of me

Hello!
Was he standing behind you /in front of you?
He was behind you./standing behind you.

[rj1948]

I'm not currently a qualified teacher.

I was standing, impatiently, in the courtyard. My brother, with all his power, pulled me back, but I was not ready to give up. I used everything I had to force myself to the front, though unfortunately, I couldn't balance. My legs slipped and I fell down - smashing my face against the hard ground. My face was bleeding and I was rushed to the hospital where I received eight stiches in my forehead. My parents beat my brother for his misdeed, yet I felt sorry for him. It was not one of his best days.

Maybe I have changed it too much?

It was one of his bad days/.It was not his day.
Thanks.

[muktha]

thanks rj

Both sentences are same right?
If he was behind,and there were two persons standing between us how to say it?

Even though he was standing behind me,there were two persons in between. is it right?

thanks

[rj1948]

thanks rj

Both sentences are same right?
If he was behind,and there were two persons standing between us how to say it?

Even though he was standing behind me,there were two persons in between. is it right?

thanks

He was behind me and there weretwo persons between us.
Regards,
rj1948.

[tedtmc]

It was not one of his best days.

It was one of his bad days.

It was not his day. (It was an unpleasant/unlucky day for him)