please, check my dialogue again

[Flyby]

Hae: If you treat me tonight, I'll forget this because it wasn't so expensive.. How about it?
Min: That's it??? Wow! You're so generous. Umm, Alright then. Why don't we go to that restaurant? It seems to be very expensive.
Hae: OK. Then, what time shall we meet?
Min: Let's see in one hour right here.
Hae: Good. See you that time.
Narration: Since that time we have hit it off each other and got married. After one year, I gave birth to twins.

Coming back to the present time.

Min: It's forgetful memory. My life has been totally changed by that travel.... and it was really happy for me just to be with him. Hey, I'm hungry...
Sun: Yes, I'm hungry too. Let's eat something.
Min: What would you like to eat?
Sun: Actually I already have made Korean party's noodle. Janchiguksu. Let's go to my house.
Min: How can I make it?
Sun: It's very easy to make it. First, Boil the noodle. Second, put sea tangle, a radish, dried anchovies and much water. This is called Su. Put the boiled noodle in a bowl and put the Su. After that, put an egg, carrot and cucumber. That's all.
Min: Hey, I can't understand anything you said. Let me get that straight. First what??
Sun: No, no. It's a secret of my recipes. Just eat it. Hahaha ~

The end

[RonBee]

Hae: If you treat me tonight, I'll forget this because it wasn't so expensive.. How about it?
Min: That's it??? Wow! You're so generous. Umm, Alright then. Why don't we go to that restaurant? It seems to be very expensive.
Hae: OK. Then, what time shall we meet?
Min: Let's meet in one hour right here.
Hae: Good. See you that then.