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[muktha]

hiiiii

One fine morning I was walking in the street.Suddenly I saw a group of dogs coming towards me.They were barking so hard.Out of fear I started running.After a while when I turned back I saw the dogs behind me.I couldn't see the big stone that was on the road.I stamped on it and fell down.Within no time the dogs surrounded me and started biting me.I struggled hard,but in vain.Gradually I lost my conciousness.when I opened my eyes I was in the hospital bed.I came to know that those were mad dogs and I was given vaccination/injection to prevent Rabies.

Thanks in advance

[beascarpetta]

just a suggestion

One fine morning as I was walking along/down the street I suddenly saw a group of dogs coming towards me.They were barking very hard.
Out of fear I started to run. After a while when I turned back I saw the dogs coming up behind me.I couldn't see the big stone that was on the road right in front of me.I stepped on it/tripped and fell down.Within no time the dogs had surrounded me and started attacking me.I tried to ward them off,but in vain.
Gradually I lost consciousness.When I opened my eyes I was in a hospital bed.I was told that those had been rabid dogs and I was given a vaccination against rabies.

[Uncle M]

Hi,

A very small point...

Alter a full point (or full stop, period - whatever you call it), always type just one space. Same applies to all punctuation marks including commas, exclamation marks, colons etc.

Dave