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[Zoe2008]

Message note. The closing date for their regular vessel schedule is every Monday. I will try to push the factory to arrange the inspection date one week earlier in order to avoid any late ship cause penalty

[sarat_106]

Message to note. The closing date of (for) their regular vessel schedule is every Monday. I will try to push the factory to arrange the inspection date one week earlier in order to avoid any penalty on account of late shipping (cause)