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14-Jun-2008, 06:20
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Lavishness curdling you, and Luxury swirling around you, is the sign that success salutes you. Soak up undisturbed calm in this unique environment. |
14-Jun-2008, 08:51
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Lavishness curdling  you and luxury swirling around you are signs that success salutes you. Soak up undisturbed calm in this unique environment.
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14-Jun-2008, 09:09
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Originally Posted by Soup  Lavishness curdling you and luxury swirling around you are signs that success salutes you. Soak up undisturbed calm in this unique environment.
| Lavishness and luxury swirling around you are signs that success salutes you. Soak up undisturbed calm in this unique environment how is it now? |
14-Jun-2008, 09:34
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Originally Posted by new2grammar Lavishness and luxury swirling around you are signs that success salutes you. Soak up undisturbed calm in this unique environment
how is it now? | Better.  What about adding living,or something along those lines here? ... in this unique living environment.
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14-Jun-2008, 09:48
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Originally Posted by Soup Better. What about adding living,or something along those lines here? ... in this unique living environment.
| that's beautiful it gives a elegant touch to sentence now thanks a lot |
14-Jun-2008, 09:51
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You're most welcome. |
14-Jun-2008, 09:54
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Originally Posted by Soup You're most welcome. | just help me out with the heading how about the following 'Loss extra pounds instantly right now ' |
14-Jun-2008, 09:57
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Lose extra pounds instantly right now
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14-Jun-2008, 10:00
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Originally Posted by Soup Lose extra pounds instantly right now
| Kindly help me with proofreading my other post |
14-Jun-2008, 10:01
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People are going to relax and lose weight at the same time?
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