Is this expression correct?

[naroad]

Never,or not?
Life is not easy for everyong,when you smile,flower is coming out..But when you cry ,flower is also ablooming.Good mood can make you success,helping you get over difficulties in life.Never give up and never give in by fate.

Could you help me? I can't find anywhere wrong.

[Soup]

Life is not easy for everyone. While you are smiling flowers are blooming, and while you are crying flower are still blooming. A good mood can make you feel successful, and this can help you get over difficulties in life. Never give up and never give in.