Is there any other way to write it?
A better home built with world’s renowned mivan technology in your budget
or
your dream home within your budget with the world's renowned Mivan technology.
Please help me to re write this sentence
Re: Is there any other way to write it?
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A better home built with world’s renowned mivan technology in your budget
or
your dream home within your budget with the world's renowned Mivan technology.
Please help me to re write this sentence
Those are not complete sentences. Did you mean to write a sentence or just an advertising slogan?
2006
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2006
Indeed it's just advertising slogan to be specific it's just an headline title of the brochure
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new2grammar
A better home built with world’s renowned mivan technology in your budget
or
your dream home within your budget with the world's renowned Mivan technology.
Please help me to re write this sentence
I see. Then something like....
a great home built with world-renowned mivan technology, and within your budget
or
your dream home within your budget with world-renowned mivan techn ology
Should mivan be capitalized?
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I see. Then something like....
a great home built with world-renowned mivan technology, and within your budget
or
your dream home within your budget with world-renowned mivan techn ology
Should mivan be capitalized?
yes Mivan has to be capitalized as it is proper noun.