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As on 16june08 mold data contain more files than the 14june08 because i was
added as

1. Locating ring -3D file.
2. In L-Gibs, 6 screw(3D) was added.

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As on 16june08 mold data contain more files than the 14june08 because i was
added as

1. Locating ring -3D file.
2. In L-Gibs, 6 screw(3D) was added.

As of 16 June 2008, the mold/mould data contained more files than on 14 June 2008 because I added the following:

1. Locating ring -3D file.
2. In L-Gibs, 6 screw(3D)