production start date

[Zoe2008]

We cannot get the schedule from Vivien until today for 9408 pcs CRD617D, could you please provide us with your inspection schedule, as well as the mass production start date. As friendly to remind you that the shipment date is 15 July, and not late ship will be accepted.
Meantime, the other 3000 pcs CRD1137 will be started production on June 26 and finished by 29? Please confirm, so that we can arrange inspection for you

[RonBee]

You can't say until today. Use a question mark with "Could you?" sentences. You could say As a friendly reminder. Make more sentences.

[RonBee]

Why do you need to say "mass production"? (Instead, prefer production start date.)

[Soup]

We were unable to get the schedule from Vivien today for 9408 pcs CRD617D, so could you please provide us with yours, as well as the mass production start date? (A friendly reminder, the shipment date is 15 July. Late shipments will not be accepted.) In the meantime, production on the other 3000 pcs CRD1137 will start on 26 June and be finished by 29 June. Please confirm these dates so that we can arrange the inspection.

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Note, there is never comma before the phrase so that. (Second reminder)

[RonBee]

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There is no need to use "mass production start date" unless you just want to be different. (Big automobile companies don't use it.)