Grammar mistake

[ritamedeiros]

Would you mind to correct my grammar or whatever mistake my letter has?

Dear Mrs. ......

As I mentioned on the interview I am writing to you to request three weeks leave. See my Annual Leave Form Request attached.

I have important family matters to deal with and I need to return home for these three weeks. I hope you will understand my situation and grant me this leave.


I am aware of my entitlement leave for the period from June 2008 to March 2009.

I will be most grateful.

Kind regards


Rita Medeiros

[vivemafille]

Would you mind correcting my grammar or whatever mistakes my letter has?

Dear Mrs. ......

As I mentioned in the interview, I am writing to you to request (or: I wish to request/I would like to request) three weeks' leave. I have important family matters to deal with and I need to return home for these three weeks. I hope you will understand my situation and grant me this leave.

I am aware of my entitlement leave for the period from June 2008 to March 2009.
Please find attached my Annual Leave Form Request. (or: I am attaching my Annual Leave Form Request.)
Thank you in advance for your consideration of my request.

Kind regards


Rita Medeiros