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    Default Kindly proofread this paragraph

    The core responsibility would be to understand client's needs and offering pro-active ideas to grow their business. Accordingly chalk out the efficient media plan to achieve client's objectives.

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    Default Re: Kindly proofread this paragraph

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    The core responsibility would be to understand client's needs and offering pro-active ideas to grow their business. Accordingly chalk out the efficient media plan to achieve client's objectives.

    I'm not a teacher but I would suggest something like this:
    "The core responsibility would be to understand the client's needs and be pro-active in offering ideas to grow their business. This involves chalking out (or drawing up) an efficient media plan to achieve the client's objectives."
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