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Did you correct only what was wrong? Or did you change things that were grammatically correct just to adapt it to your personal style?
I don't see anything wrong with the sentence.
The underlined part sounds a bit vague though.
not a teacher
With the underlined part I wanted to say "you changed the text just because you are a pretentious person and want to impose your writing style on me".
Thanks.
(not a professional teacher) I agree that "suit your personal style" fits best. The phrase "change it to suit" is very common in most English variants I'm aware of, and sounds very natural.
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