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  1. 08-Jul-2008, 04:56 #1
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    Default is this sentence correct?


    When will you start the production for HX2330? We are looking for your good news today.
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    Default Re: is this sentence correct?

    You might want to change the second sentence. Perhaps:
    When will you start the production for HX2330? Please tell us as soon as it gets started.
    What do you think?

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