[Support] 8> Could you find and correct any mistakes in the paragraph(life in university)

[dodonaomik]

Tigher hill is in my university and very common.Once and once ,I went up to recite the English like one celestial being or one hermit/recluse/anchorite/solitary and slowly was forgetting the uproar and the hubbub.

Thank you !

[bhaisahab]

Originally Posted by dodonaomik

Tigher hill is in my university and very common.Once and once ,I went up to recite the English like one celestial being or one hermit/recluse/anchorite/solitary and slowly was forgetting the uproar and the hubbub.

Thank you !

Tigher hill is in my university and very common.Once, only once ,I went up to recite English like a celestial being or a hermit/recluse/anchorite/solitary and slowlyI forgot the uproar and the hubbub.
I don't know if this is what you are trying to say, but these are my suggestions.

[dodonaomik]

Originally Posted by bhaisahab

Tigher hill is in my university and very common.I went up to recite English like a celestial being or a hermit many times ,and slowly I forgot the uproar .
I don't know if this is what you are trying to say, but these are my suggestions.

Are there any wrongs?
hehe,
English may be like a pretty girl,though myself may be very ugly ,so has no qulifications to love her.

Secondly,it is very funny to translate "Chinese sentence" directly into English.After all, Chinese culture is a shock to Enlish culture

[RonBee]

Say:

Did you find any mistakes?

What do you mean when you say the university is common?

[dodonaomik]

Tigher hill in my university is very common,but I felt it was lovely ,so I went up to recite English like a celestial being or a hermit many times ,and slowly I forgot the uproar

[RonBee]

Let's try one more time.

What do you mean by "Tigher hill in my university is very common"?

but I felt it was lovely ,so I went up to recite English like a celestial being or a hermit many times ,and slowly I forgot the uproar

Please space after commas, not before. And don't forget periods (full stops).

[dodonaomik]

There is a hill, named Tigher hill , in my university.
And the hill is very common, but I felt it was lovely .
Ever I went it up many times to recite English like a celestial being or a hermit , and at the same time I slowly forgot the uproar


Dear RonBee ,can you understand my words basically?
Can you write the "right(It is right only in yourself 's eyes )" sentences for me?Thank you very much!!!

[RonBee]

Originally Posted by dodonaomik

There is a hill, named Tigher hill , in my university.

Now I get it. Perhaps:

There is a hill named Tigher Hill on the campus of the university.

Originally Posted by dodonaomik

And the hill is very common, but I felt it was lovely .

There is nothing special about the hill, but to me it is lovely.

Originally Posted by dodonaomik

Ever I went it up many times to recite English like a celestial being or a hermit , and at the same time I slowly forgot the uproar

I have gone up the hill many times to recite English like a celestial being or a hermit, and at the same time I slowly forgot the uproar.

That is a rather odd sentence, but at the same time it is rather poetic.

[dodonaomik]

I'm very very happy,
and I appreciate you very very much.




Yeah,you are very very right.
The sentence is very odd but a little poetic,
and I like the poetic words which taste very delicious really,




RonBee, shie shie(in Chinese)

THE END

[RonBee]

Words that taste good, eh?