is this text ok?

[jctgf]

I'll buy a new wireless mouse for your notebook. It will be better than the one you have now. The buttons will be softer and the quality will be better, generally speaking. It's by Bright, the brand I have mentioned to you.

Hi, is this sentence ok, please?
Thanks.

[tedtmc]

I'll buy a new wireless mouse for your notebook. It will be better than the one you have now. The buttons will be softer and the quality will be generally better. It's by Bright, the brand I have mentioned to you.

The sentence is fine. I have made a suggestion as highlighted.

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