[Essay] very short writing, need your advice

[peterwook]

I need your advice in terms of grammar or ideas , etc.
Whatever is ok, just help me please.

The best way of learning languages is exposing yourself for a long time.
That doesn't mean by just sitting on a chair longer time but using and practing together.
During the time, you can gain a sense of the language, which I think is the key to learning a language.
I'm not an English teacher. I'm an English coach that helps you to become an English communicator.
I would like to speak English with you.

Thank you

[bhaisahab]

Originally Posted by peterwook

I need your advice in terms of grammar or ideas , etc.
Whatever is ok, just help me please.

The best way of learning languages is exposing yourself for a long time.
That doesn't mean by just sitting on a chair longer time but using and practing together.
During the time, you can gain a sense of the language, which I think is the key to learning a language.
I'm not an English teacher. I'm an English coach that helps you to become an English communicator.
I would like to speak English with you.

Thank you

The best way to learn a language is to get plenty of exposure to that language. A good way to do this is to practise regularly with another person, someone who has a good knowledge of the language you wish to learn or improve your skills in. I am not an English teacher, I am an English coach, I can help you to become a good communicator in English.
I would like to speak English with you.

My suggestions.