Are these sentences correct ?

Zoe2008 · #1 (**permalink**) 13-Jul-2008, 14:30

Is the mass production starting for July 15 still unchanged?

We would like to confirm you that our project manager Mr. Wong and his team member will arrive to your factory on July 15 for in-line inspection.

This is the second reminder to all of you to return the report to me before July 25.

**RonBee** · #2 (**permalink**) 13-Jul-2008, 14:41

Try:

Is the July 15th production date still unchanged?

The rest is fine.

tedtmc · #3 (**permalink**) 13-Jul-2008, 14:46

We would like to confirm (you)that our project manager, Mr. Wong and his team member will arrive at (to) your factory on July 15 for in-line inspection.

This is the second reminder to all of you to submit (return) the report to me before July 25.

not a teacher

**RonBee** · #4 (**permalink**) 13-Jul-2008, 16:10

Quote:

Originally Posted by Zoe2008

We would like to confirm you that our project manager Mr. Wong and his team member will arrive to your factory on July 15 for in-line inspection.

We would like to confirm that our project manager Mr. Wong and his team will arrive at your factory on July 15 for in-line inspection.

**RonBee** · #5 (**permalink**) 13-Jul-2008, 16:14

Quote:

Originally Posted by tedtmc

This is the second reminder to all of you to submit the report to me before July 25.

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