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Don't be worry, actually you are so nice to us. We will forward such report to our relevant colleague or department, but would like your assist for our easier handle. We appreciate for your help.
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Don't get (be) worried, when (actually) you have been (are) so nice to us. We will forward the (such) report to our respective (relevant) colleague or department, but would like your assistance (for our) in handling the matter with easie . We would appreciate (for) your co-operation in this regard(help).
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Don't be worry, actually you are so nice to us.

Say:
Don't worry

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Don't be worried

As for the second part of that sentence, I don't see how it goes with the first part of the sentence.

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We will forward such report to our relevant colleague or department, but would like your assist for our easier handle.
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Try:
We will forward each report to the person best equipped to handle it.
As for the second part of that sentence, I really don't know how it goes with the first part of the sentence.

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We will forward the report to the relevant colleague or department, but we would like your assistance in handling the matter.
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Here is the revised version incorporating the good suggestions from RunBee

Don't be worried, when you have been so nice to us. We will forward the/each report to the person best equipped to handle it but please co-oprate with us for an easy solution to the matter . We would appreciate your help.

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