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[eypoul]

Dear sir,

I am Phd student from University of Birmingham, UK and I would like to take part in the doctoral course entitled 'Electrokinetics in Civil and Environmental Engineering' that will be held on October 2008. I am very interested to take part because it's related to my research study on electrokinetic.Therefore, I would be grateful if you could give me further information about the course such as registration, accommodation and tentative program. Hope to hear from you soon. Thank you.

[eypoul]

Hi, Thedaffodils.Thank you very much for your quick reply. I'm really appreciated it. See you again.

[thedaffodils]

Hi, sorry, I just deleted it because I am neither a teacher nor a native speaker. I hope teachers or native speakers could give you a hand.

Er, anyway, since you have read it, I will put it up again.

[thedaffodils]

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a Ph.D. student at University of Birmingham, the UK. I would like to take part in the doctoral course of 'Electrokinetics in Civil and Environmental Engineering' that will start in October 2008. I am very interested in it because my research study is on electrokinetics.

I would be grateful if you could offer me more information about the course, such as registration, accommodation,tentative program, etc.

I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you!

Best regards,

I am not a teacher. Here's my two cents. Hope this helps.

[tedtmc]

Dear Sir,

I am a Phd student from University of Birmingham, UK. I would like to take part in the doctoral course entitled 'Electrokinetics in Civil and Environmental Engineering' that will be held in October 2008 at (venue?). It is related to my current research study on Electrokinetics, hence my keen interest in the course (to avoid starting the sentence with 'I' again).

I would be grateful if you could send me further information about the course such as registration, accommodation and the tentative program. ('Hope to hear from you soon' is not a complete sentence.) Thank you.

not a teacher