letter of advice...

[bosun]

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1. I am sorry to hear that your father lost his valuable silver pot.

2.Referring to what you have mentioned in your letter, I suspect your fiancee may have stolen it because the phone mubers and names perfectly match with the ones published in the advertisements.

3. I advise that you should meet him right away and ask him if he really stole it .

4. If he confesses, you should forgive him. If not, you'd better report him to the police.

5. I hope my advice helped you to find a way to solve this problem.

[David L.]

1. I am sorry to hear that your father lost his valuable silver pot.

2. From what you say in your letter, I suspect your fiancee may have stolen it because the phone numbers and names perfectly match the ones published in the advertisements.

3. I suggest you meet with him right away/My advice is to meet with him right away and ask him if he indeed stole it .

4. If he confesses, you should forgive him. If not, you'd better report him to the police.
(The red is casual, conversational speech. Is this a letter to a friend? If so, then it's fine.)

5. I hope this advice helps you to solve this problem.

Editorial comment: If he confesses, perhaps you might advice her to forgive and forget - forgive him perhaps, but to forget him! Don't marry a thief! This is what engagements are for: to get to know the real character of your intended.
He stole from his prospective father-in- law, the father of his so-called true love and soul-mate. The alarm bells should be deafening.