Please check these sentences..

[jomo27]

1. Don't be afraid to take the risk, or you won't be success.

2. There are many people outsite there who needs our help.

3. Give 1% of your happiness to those people who need it outside.

4. Don't let your friends persuade your mind.

5. Everything starts from zero.

[tedtmc]

1. Don't be afraid to take (the) risk, or you won't be successful.

2. There are many people outsite outside there who needs need our help.

3. Give 1% of your happiness to those people who need it. (outside)

4. Don't let your friends persuade your mind. influence you.

5. Everything starts from zero.


not at teacher

[jomo27]

Thanks man.

Btw, for the 1st one, can I say "Don't be afraid to take a risk"?

[amigos4]

Thanks man.

Btw, for the 1st one, can I say "Don't be afraid to take a risk"?

Yes! "Don't be afraid to take a risk!" is common usage.

Cheers,
Amigo

[jomo27]

Yes! "Don't be afraid to take a risk!" is common usage.

Cheers,
Amigo

So.. If I put "Don't be afraid to take a risk, or you won't be successful" is fine?

I still don't really understand of using 'a' and 'the'

Please teach me.

[Jaskin]

hello,
NOte I'm not a teaacher,

1. Don't be afraid to take the risk, or you won't be success.

Another alternative :
Don't be afreid to take a risk , or you won't succed.

If you describe a risk ( previously in convrsation) then use the .
If it is general statement then a.

Cheers,