objective field in a resumé

[anreak]

Hi could you guys check this sentence for me? It's supposed to be a part of the "objective" field in a resumé.

A job in a dynamic environment, which will offer me the opportunity to get in touch with different tasks, problems and new technologies.

I thought it was ok, but MSWord checking tool is marking it as a sentence to be revised.

[Anglika]

Hi could you guys check this sentence for me? It's supposed to be a part of the "objective" field in a resumé.

A job in a dynamic environment, which will offer me the opportunity to get in touch with different tasks, problems and new technologies.

I thought it was ok, but MSWord checking tool is marking it as a sentence to be revised.

Word's grammar checker is simple-minded!

The sentence is ok, but I would replace "to get in touch with" with "to benefit from encountering".

[goldenboytim]

Word's grammar checker is simple-minded!

The sentence is ok, but I would replace "to get in touch with" with "to benefit from encountering".

Hi All

Or perhaps 'to experience'

Regards

Tim

[Anglika]

Good one! Thanks.

[anreak]

Thank you guys for your suggestions.

;)