2>Adventure In The Love-wonderland

Wegot along continuely. Involuntarily and inadvertently we passed one old man, who was coming toward us that time and her papa?
After a while, I pushed the door open lightly, and entered one room, which likely appears somewhat primitive.


I believe there are some mistakes, can you help me to correct them? Thanks a lot!:lilangel::lilangel::lilangel::popcorn:

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Originally Posted by dodonaomik

We got along continuely. Involuntarily and inadvertently we passed one old man, who was coming toward us that time and her papa?
After a while, I pushed the door open lightly, and entered one room, which likely appears somewhat primitive.

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As we walked along, we passed an old man who was coming towards us. [[What is the relevance of "her papa"?]]

After a while, I gently pushed open the door and entered the room, which was bare and primitive inside.

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Originally Posted by Anglika

[[What is the relevance of "her papa"?]]

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:smilecol::smilecol:These things are the contents of my dream, and I felt that old man was like the girl's Papa when dreaming.:oops::oops::oops:
:smilecol::morning::morning::cheers::cheers:
Anglika, thank you! Thank you!