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2>Adventure In The Love-wonderland
Wegot along continuely. Involuntarily and inadvertently we passed one old man, who was coming toward us that time and her papa?
After a while, I pushed the door open lightly, and entered one room, which likely appears somewhat primitive.
I believe there are some mistakes, can you help me to correct them? Thanks a lot!


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Originally Posted by
dodonaomik
We got along continuely. Involuntarily and inadvertently we passed one old man, who was coming toward us that time and her papa?
After a while, I pushed the door open lightly, and entered one room, which likely appears somewhat primitive.
As we walked along, we passed an old man who was coming towards us. [[What is the relevance of "her papa"?]]
After a while, I gently pushed open the door and entered the room, which was bare and primitive inside.
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