grammar mistakes

Any grammar mistakes in the sentence below.

"Attached please find the portfolio statement for July 2008 for your reference. "

How to put it to make it sound more professional?

Thank you.

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Originally Posted by miclys94

Any grammar mistakes in the sentence below.

"Attached please find the portfolio statement for July 2008 for your reference. "

How to put it to make it sound more professional?

Thank you.

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Please, find the statement for the portfolio in July 2008 attached to you for your reference.

Not a teacher.:-)

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Originally Posted by miclys94

Any grammar mistakes in the sentence below.

"Attached please find the portfolio statement for July 2008 for your reference. "

How to put it to make it sound more professional?

Thank you.

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It sounds professional as it is.
"Please find attached the portfolio ... " is more common. No commas.