are these correct?

[Zoe2008]

Please mark the lot number on the carton and nearby / beside the shipping mark of (the line of) measurement.

The total freight from China to France is USD xxx. Please provide me the copies of passport and residence letter from your daughter; we need to send them to the forwarder to arrange the customer clearance in France. Please confirm your acceptance for the rate for my arrangement

The inspection was passed yesterday, the report will be sent you later today

[colloquium]

Please mark the lot number on the carton near/beside the shipping mark of (the line of) measurement. (not sure about this last part)

The total freight from China to France is USD xxx. Please provide me with copies of your daughter's passport and residence letter; we need to send them to the forwarder to arrange the customer clearance in France. Please confirm your acceptance of the rate with regards to my arrangement

The inspection was passed yesterday, the report will be sent you later today

I'm unsure about some parts which I have tried to correct.

I'm not a teacher.