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- 13-Oct-2004, 13:31 #1
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The sentence needs to be improved
Our economic expansion has realized the transition from quantitative change to qulitative change.
- 14-Oct-2004, 13:42 #2
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Teacher 'Our economic growth has realized the transition from quantitative to qualitative change.'
Congratulations, NH!
- 14-Oct-2004, 15:03 #3
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Do you feel comfortable to change expansion to growth without more information on the context?
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- 14-Oct-2004, 21:24 #4
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Teacher Yes, I do. 'Growth' is the collocation here, unless it is some very wierd economic development you are speaking of.
- 18-Oct-2004, 06:43 #5
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Threadstarter / Original Poster Thanks Mister Micawber.
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- 18-Oct-2004, 07:48 #6
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Teacher I agree with Mr Micawber that 'growth' is the collocation for here.
How about this?
'Our economic growth has made the transition from quantitative to qualitative change.'
- 18-Oct-2004, 08:21 #7
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Threadstarter / Original Poster Excellent! Tdol! :D
- 18-Oct-2004, 08:34 #8
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Teacher You're welcome.
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