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| Cars that were made in China are unsafe. Cars that contribute to pollution should be banned. into these two: Cars made in China are unsafe. Cars contributing to pollution should be banned. Also my tutor also taught me this: Change: The high cooking temperature alters the molecular structure of the oil, which make the food unhealthy and difficult to digest. into: The high cooking temperature alters the molecular structure of the oil, making the food unhealth and difficult to digest. And in my recent essay, I used this method. Instead of writing: The success of restaurants which convince individuals to consume relies on several techniques. I wrote: The success of restaurants convincing individuals to consume relies on several techniques. I have never figured out how these techniques work. I read some grammar books and thought the shorter sentences were related to participial phrases, but I wasn't 100 percent sure. Could you confirm the modified versions have participial phrases? Last edited by dtbtb; 08-Aug-2008 at 08:17. |
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| Take a look here Reduced Relative Clauses. |
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| Thank you! That helped a lot! |
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| You're most welcome. |
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