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  1. 17-Aug-2008, 16:14 #1
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    Default Can you help me correcting?

    1. Trying to achieve something big.

    2. If I attain it, it would be very fantastic.

    3. Trying to attain something really tough and competitive.

    4. Preparing myself to catch my dream/goal. <- Which is better to use?



    Thank you very much!
  2. 17-Aug-2008, 20:09 #2
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    Default Re: Can you help me correcting?

    I'm trying to achieve something big.

    I'm trying to reach my goal(s).

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