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Old 02-Sep-2008, 11:56
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This traffic fine was due to overload carriage
This incident was occurred during the time of shifting of overshaped items from our warehouse to Project XY in December 2007
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This traffic (shipping? road?) fine was due to a (weight? size?) overload during shipment.

This incident occurred during the time of shifting (transport? shipping?) of overshaped items from our warehouse to Project XY in December 2007
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This was a road traffic fine due to overload (size), incident was occurred during the time of transportation of items from our warehouse to Project XY, this incident occurred
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This was a road traffic fine due to an overload (size) situation which occurred during the transportation of items from our warehouse to Project XY. This incident happened in December 2007.

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