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Question three flyer slogans - grammar test appreciated

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below are 3 slogans which will be printed on flyers. Any check would be highly appreciated.

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Local Restaurants and Vineyards presented online in video mixed with fresh Recipes and Tips & Tricks all about Dining with Wine in your local Area.

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Local Dog Breeders presented online in video mixed with fresh Tips & Tricks and other news all about dogs.

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We produce high quality event videos professional and affordable for every budget. Check out our website and call or email us today!
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Default Re: three flyer slogans - grammar test appreciated

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Hello,
below are 3 slogans which will be printed on flyers. Any check would be highly appreciated.

Thank you a lot.
Rookie

1)
Local Restaurants and Vineyards presented in online video together with fresh Recipes and Tips & Tricks all omit about Dining with Wine in your local Area.

2)
Local Dog Breeders presented in online video mixed with fresh Tips & Tricks and omit with other information and news about dogs.

3)
We produce high quality event videos professionally and affordable for omit and for every budget. Check out our website and call or email us today!
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Default Re: three flyer slogans - grammar test appreciated

These aren't slogans - they are headlines.

Are you selling online-in-video services?

What is Tips & Tricks? What does "mixed" mean?


It is not clear WHEN the presentations will take place.


1)
Local Restaurants and Vineyards will present online-in-video featuring local Dining With Wine, mixed with fresh recipes and Tips & Tricks.

2)
Local Dog Breeders will present online-in-video news all about dogs, mixed with fresh Tips & Tricks.

3)
We produce high quality, professional, and affordable event videos for every budget. Check out our website and call or email us today!
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