key point

[muktha]

Please correct these sentences

1.One of the Key point I noticed in your ad was you were giving equal opportunities to freshers as well.

2.Most of the empoyers of IT companies are looking for experienced persons. That is what I could understand after being here for four months.

3.There is no point in being adament that I will work only in the IT field.

Regards
Muktha

[sarat_106]

Please correct these sentences

1.One of the Key point I noticed in your ad was you were giving equal opportunities to freshers as well.

2.Most of the empoyers of IT companies are looking for experienced persons. That is what I could understand after being here for four months.

3.There is no point in being adament about that I will work only in the IT field.
Regards
Muktha

Your sentences appear to be ok grammatically, except for use of the word about.