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Hi,

any grammar mistakes for the sentence below? kindly advise

[FONT='Calibri','sans-serif']"We would like to inform you that we have bought for you 60,000 ABC shares at S$10 each. "[/font]
[FONT='Calibri','sans-serif'][/font]
[FONT='Calibri','sans-serif']Thank you.[/font]
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Hi, any grammar mistakes for the sentence below? Kindly advise

"We would like to inform you that we have bought for you 60,000 ABC shares at S$10 each. "


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No errors.

You could say "have bought on your behalf".
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