Please proofread the following sentence.
Children nowadays like to eat a lot of snacks before meals. They then eat less in the meals. This seriously disturb their eating habits.
I suggest you change in the meals, as this doesn't sound correct to me.
Originally Posted by peter123
You could also use inbetween instead of before meals - but that is your choice.
Also, you forgot to add the 3rd person (singular) s to the verb disturb. This is an important inflection.
I am not a teacher.
I would suggest this;
"They then eat less at mealtimes."
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