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[peter123]

Hi there,
Please proofread the following sentence.
Children nowadays like to eat a lot of snacks before meals. They then eat less in the meals. This seriously disturb their eating habits.

Thanks
pete

[colloquium]

Hi there,
Please proofread the following sentence.
Children nowadays like to eat a lot of snacks before/inbetween meals. They then eat less during mealtime. This seriously disturbs their eating habits.

Thanks
pete

I suggest you change in the meals, as this doesn't sound correct to me.

You could also use inbetween instead of before meals - but that is your choice.

Also, you forgot to add the 3rd person (singular) s to the verb disturb. This is an important inflection.

He disturbs

John disturbs

It disturbs

This/that disturbs

I am not a teacher.

[bhaisahab]

I would suggest this;

"They then eat less at mealtimes."