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please underline my errors in paragraph and edit them
What is your city like?
My city is one of the biggest and the most beautiful ones in my country.It has got many gardens and It also has ancient monuments, So a lot of tourists are interested in coming and visiting here .Its population is about 7 million.Most buildings are modern.And shopes are too.Although there are many advantages in living there, It has some weak points including traffic problems, growing prices, air pollution and etc.
Re: please underline my errors in paragraph and edit them
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What is your city like?
My city is one of the biggest and the most beautiful ones in my country. It has got many gardens and it also has ancient monuments. So a lot of tourists are interested in coming and visiting here. Its population is about 7 million. Most buildings are modern. And shopes are too. Although there are many advantages in living there, it has some weak points including traffic problems, growing prices, air pollution etc.
I'd be happy to do that, but I explained how to use spaces with periods and commas last time. I'll edit those bits.
Re: please underline my errors in paragraph and edit them
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Originally Posted by taghavi
My city is one of the biggest and the most beautiful ones in my country.It has got many gardens and It also has ancient monuments, So a lot of tourists are interested in coming and visiting here .Its population is about 7 million.Most buildings are modern.And shopes are too.Although there are many advantages in living there, It has some weak points including traffic problems, growing prices, air pollution and etc.
My city is one of the biggest and the most beautiful ones in my country. It has many gardens and, it also has ancient monuments. So a lot of tourists are interested in coming here. Its population is about 7 million. Most buildings here are modern. And the shops are modern too. Although there are many advantages to living here, the city does have some weak points including traffic problems, rising prices, and air pollution.
please underline my errors in paragraph and edit them 
Re: please underline my errors in paragraph and edit them 
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