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15-Sep-2008, 16:06
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| | Availability to relocate, proofreading please...? I am answering to an head hunter who is asking to me if I am looking to relocate from from London. So my answer would be:
Hello XXXX
Thank you for your e-mail.
Yes, even though I live in London, I am available to relocate from London to any place in UK.
Let me know if you need any other information, please.
With warm regards
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15-Sep-2008, 16:13
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| | Re: Availability to relocate, proofreading please...? I don't know how formal you need this to be, this is OK for informal:
Hello XXXX
Thank you for your e-mail.
Yes, even though I live in London, I am available to relocate to anywhere in the UK.
Please let me know if you need any further information,
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15-Sep-2008, 16:21
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| | Re: Availability to relocate, proofreading please...? I think my writer is using an informal approach, he wrote: myname,
Hi, this role is based in Liverpool in the northwest of England.
Are you looking to relocate from London?
hisname So, using your correction I would add a piece to the text as below:Hello XXXX
Thank you for your e-mail.
Yes, even though I live in London, I am available to relocate to anywhere in the UK. And Liverpool sounds fine to me.
Please let me know if you need any further information,
With warm regards What do you think? | 
15-Sep-2008, 17:37
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| | Re: Availability to relocate, proofreading please...? Quote:
Originally Posted by SunMoon I think my writer is using an informal approach, he wrote: myname,
Hi, this role is based in Liverpool in the northwest of England.
Are you looking to relocate from London?
hisname So, using your correction I would add a piece to the text as below:Hello XXXX
Thank you for your e-mail.
Yes, even though I live in London, I am available to relocate to anywhere in the UK. And Liverpool sounds fine to me.
Please let me know if you need any further information,
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