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Old 16-Sep-2008, 09:03
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Hi,
Im not a native English speaker and Im trying to write a formal letter to a university professor. I want to say "I am very interested" and i want to show a strong enthusiasm. I dont want to use this phrase. I would appreciate that if someone helps me. Which one of these following sentences is better for a formal letter? or is there any better sentence?

- I am passionate about ...
- I am enthusiastic about ....
- I am eager about ....
- ...

Thanks a lot.
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Old 16-Sep-2008, 09:06
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Hi,
Im not a native English speaker and Im trying to write a formal letter to a university professor. I want to say "I am very interested" and i want to show a strong enthusiasm. I dont want to use this phrase. I would appreciate that if someone helps me. Which one of these following sentences is better for a formal letter? or is there any better sentence?

- I am passionate about ...
- I am enthusiastic about ....
- I am eager about ....
- ...

Thanks a lot.
Without knowing the subject it's difficult to be sure but, "I am very enthusiastic about..." seems good.
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Thanks for your help. Im going to make a request about applying in university and exactly i want to say "im interested in your research area" Thanks again
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How about:
(reasearch area) interests me greatly
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"I am enthusiastic about"

This one is better.
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