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| punish him by not playing with him. Even though Rocky is a big responsiblity, I still enjoy taking care of him. Should I begin a new paragraph where it says Even though Rocky is a big responsibilty, I still enjoy taking care of him. |
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| You don't have to, but if I can make a purely subjective point, it breaks somewhat the flow of the paragraph.: 1) Rocky can be naughty (why's that?) => 2) He jumps on my bed and... (oh, bad dog) => 3) I would punish him (yeah, that's normal) => 4) Even though taking care of R. is a big responsibility (oh, that's the bottom line already?) 1, 2 and 3 work well together, but there's no smooth transition between 3 and 4. Oh well, maybe it's all hogwash after all FRC |
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