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Old 22-Sep-2008, 23:49
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Post I failed this essay. Could someone help correct it?

http://sarahst.com/nessay.doc

It's a narrative about a personal experience, and the professor said I have too many comma splices and sentence structure problems.
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Default Re: I failed this essay. Could someone help correct it?

What writing level is your class?

The story is not written that badly.

What did you "fail"?
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thanks for your help.
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