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1. You seemed to very upset because you were charged for drinks ,which you thought were for free.
2.The drinks were free but only between 7 and 8 p.m. as advertised. (You should have checked the time on the promotional ad one more time before you came to the restaurant)
3. Everyone at the bar enjoyed free drinks between 7 and 8 p.m.
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Originally Posted by bosun
1. You seemed to very upset because you were charged for drinks ,which you thought were for free.
Either:
1. You seemed to be very upset because you were charged for drinks , which you thought were (omit 'for') free.
or
1. You seemed very upset because you were charged for drinks you thought were free.
or
1. You seemed very upset at being charged for drinks you thought were free.
2.The drinks were free but only between 7 and 8 p.m. as advertised. (You should have checked the times on the promotional ad one more time before you came to the restaurant)
or
2.As clearly advertised, drinks at the restaurant were free between 7 and 8 p.m. only. These times appear on the promotional ad, and responsibility lay with those attending to be aware of this fact.)
3. Everyone at the bar enjoyed free drinks between 7 and 8 p.m.