Poem on the elephant man

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Your beauty was unfamiliar

You looked like nobody on this earth

You were different, unique

Because of your appearance and your personality

A strong personality

Built, hardened as the trials went by

Because you fought again rejection and pain

Pain caused by people perception towards you

I hoped that your appearance could become an advantage

That your beauty was going to be found

That you were going to be a man

And, at last, that you lived you life

In fact, they didn’t see you

They analysed your appearance

Without looking deep in your soul

Where hidden your beauty was real

Please, could you correct this poem... quickly because it is for friday afternoon

[Anglika]

Your beauty was unfamiliar,
You looked like nobody on this earth
You were different, unique
Because of your appearance and your personality.
A strong personality,
Built, hardened as the trials went by
Because you fought again rejection and pain,
Pain caused by people perception towards you
Pain caused by people's perception of you.

I hoped that your appearance could become an advantage,
That your beauty was going to be found,
That you were going to be a man.
And, at last, that you lived your life.
In fact, they didn’t see you.
They analysed your appearance
Without looking deep in your soul
Where hidden your beauty was real.

Please, could you correct this poem... quickly because it is for friday afternoon

Well done!