childhood

[peter123]

Hi there,

Could you proofread the following sentences?

Health childhood is important for the development for children. War and diseasters may make childhood have a bad shadow.

thanks
pete pva

[Neillythere]

Hi Peter

As a Brit, but not a teacher, I would suggest the following:

Health during childhood is important for children's development.
War and diseasters may cast a bad shadow childhood development.

Hope this helps
NT