Can you fix the translate of my certificate

[Ildus1988]

This is my certificate, which was translated from russia. Is it right from english point of view?




THE EDUCATION MINISTRY OF REPUBLIC TATARSTAN
Sovet of university rectors of Republic Tatarstan
Sovet of college directors of Republic Tatarstan

Given to Mingazetdinov Ildus to the student of 9th class Musljumovo high school №2 as a winner (3 place) in chemistry of the republican Olympiad of students of schools of 2003.


Owner of the certificate has the right to the privileges provided by Act about republican science olympiad of schools students of republic Tatarstan

the Certificate is valid for republic of Tatarstan

Minister of Education F. F. Harisov
of Republic Tatarstan

Head of the University rectors council N. G. Hairullin

Head of the College directors council V. M. Sohabeev

Head of judge
№29
Issued “9th February 2003”
Round seal: Tatarstan republic Education Department INN1654002248

[Anglika]

This is my certificate, which was translated from Russian. Is it right from an English point of view?




THE EDUCATION MINISTRY OF REPUBLIC TATARSTAN The Republic of Tatarstan
Sovet of university rectors of Republic Tatarstan The Soviet of University Rectors of the Republic of Tatarstan
Sovet of college directors of Republic Tatarstan The Soviet of College Directors of.....

Given to Mingazetdinov Ildus, student of 9th class Musljumovo High School №2 as a winner (3 place) in chemistry at the Republican Olympiad of School Students of 2003.


The recipient of the certificate has the right to the privileges provided by Act relating to the Republican Science Olympiad of School Students of the Republic of Tatarstan.

The Certificate is valid in the Republic of Tatarstan

Minister of Education F. F. Harisov
of the Republic of Tatarstan

Head of the University Rectors' Council N. G. Hairullin

Head of the College Directors' Council V. M. Sohabeev

Head of judges
№29
Issued “9th February 2003”
Round seal: Tatarstan Republic Education Department INN1654002248

..