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please correct my short essay
i just got home.it has been a very long day . i got up very early at dawn.at 10 am i
had to take an exam.It was a little test and i spent the rest of the day at the
library making some researches.
at night i went go back home . i was a bit tired and turned the tv on and sat down.
there was a journalist on tv who was talking about something horrible
which made me concerned about.
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Re: please correct my short essay

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i just got home.it has been a very long day . i got up very early at dawn.at 10 am i
had to take an exam.It was a little test and i spent the rest of the day at the
library making some researches.
at night i went go back home . i was a bit tired and turned the tv on and sat down.
there was a journalist on tv who was talking about something horrible
which made me concerned about.
Firstly, you need to follow the capitalisation rules.
Also there is no space before a period or comma, and there is one after.
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