So many people were attracted

[mylevt]

Hi,
Could you tell me if the sentence is correct.
"So many people were attracted by the Presidential visit that all trafic came to a standstill."
Thanks.

[amigos4]

Hi,
Could you tell me if the sentence is correct.
"So many people were attracted by the Presidential visit that all trafic came to a standstill."
Thanks.

The following sentences are correct:
"So many people were attracted by the presidential visit that all trafic came to a standstill."
"So many people were attracted by President Kennedy's visit that all trafic came to a standstill."

Cheers,
Amigo

[sarat_106]

Hi,
Could you tell me if the sentence is correct.
"So many people were attracted by the Presidential visit that all traffic came to a standstill."
Thanks.

Grammatically it is ok, but I would prefer like this:
The Presidential visit attracted so many people that all traffic came to a standstill.

[Simar Kharbanda]

Hi
I think your sentence is correct. And using 'so many people' in the beginnng of the sentence may mean that there is a stress used in the sentence.

take care

[Raymott]

Hi,
Could you tell me if the sentence is correct.
"So many people were attracted by the Presidential visit that all trafic came to a standstill."
Thanks.

All you need to do is spell "traffic" correctly, and it's a perfectly good sentence.

[amigos4]

All you need to do is spell "traffic" correctly, and it's a perfectly good sentence.

Thanks, Ray! I overlooked the misspelling of traffic! Nice catch!

Cheers,
Amigo