I have only proofed your version.Here are two passages. One is quoted from a booklet, one is my rephrasing. If you have time, please proofread both.
1.In this master degree program, I had the chance to approach different sectors under environmental and public health category. 2.These courses were taught by experienced professors and it involved experience sharing by professionals in related sectors. 3.These program materials allowed us to obtain the basic requirement to be in the management level in these sectors. 4.The knowledge I learned from this program was useful in applying for the job that I am currectly undertaking.5. Since environment-oriented issues are very new worldwide, there is rarely a well-equipped master program on this in Hong Kong. 6.I believe this master program offered by this university is a helpful program for professionals and students who have been developing and who have the intention to develop their career in environment-oriented sections.
The following is my tweaked version. Your proofreading is very much appreciated too.
1.This master degree program offered me opportunities to approach many sectors of Environmental and Public Health studies. 2. In the courses, the professors' expertise and experience inspired us a lot. 3.The program materials are so useful as to qualify us to be competitive at management level in these sectors. 4.The knowledge I acquired from this program helped me apply and successfully get the post in which I have been working.5. Since environment-oriented issues have become a new concern all over the world, the related well-equipped master programs are still not enough in HK. 6.I believe this master program as offered by this university is a helpful program for professionals and students who have every intention of launching their career in environment-oriented sectors.
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