Where do the commas go
where do the commas go.
WESLEY JUMPED OFF HIS OLD RUSTY BIKE. BENDING LOW TO THE GROUND HE CREPT TOWARDS THE HAUNTED HOUSE. AS HE REACHED THE DOOR A HUGE SPIDER LEAPT INTO HIS HAIR WITH A LOUD SQUEAK. REACHING OUT HIS SHAKING HAND HE RATTLED THE DOOR HANDLE. THE ANCIENT DOOR CREAKED MOANED AND GROANED.
Re: Where do the commas go
(Not a teacher)
I would definitely put commas after the following words: ground, hand, creaked, and moaned.
The comma would seem optional after the words old and door (first use).
Last edited by Greg Forbes; 09-Nov-2008 at 06:17.
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