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Old 04-Nov-2008, 12:02
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This is a small letter at the end of presentation i would like to insert kindly check for grammar errors if any

We assure you the best services from our end, for which we are renowned in the industry. This PR activity will create the top of the mind brand awareness and a strong brand proposition in the market.
We are looking forward to work together toward achieving institution’s vision.

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Old 04-Nov-2008, 13:22
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Default Re: Check for grammar!!!

We assure you the best services from our end, for which we are renowned in the industry. This PR activity will create the top of the mind brand awareness and a strong brand proposition in the market.
We are looking forward to work together toward achieving institution’s vision.

We are well known and respected in the industry and assure you the best service from our end. This PR activity will create brand awareness in people's minds as well as as a strong brand position in the market.
We look forward to working together with you in achieving your institution's vision.

Is this what you meant to say??

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Old 04-Nov-2008, 13:25
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This is a small letter at the end of presentation i would like to insert kindly check for grammar errors if any

We assure you the best of services from our end, for which we are renowned in the industry. This PR activity will create the top of the mind brand awareness and a strong brand proposition in the market.
We are looking forward to work together for (toward) achieving institution’s vision.
Thanks in advance
Excepting for some minor modifications that too optional, the text is fine.
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