Would you be kind enough to revise my paraphrasing of the bolded words and word combinations from the following sentences?
1.1. There were two groups in the French labour movement.
1.2. There were two fractions sections/sectors in the French labour movement.
2.1. He believed that the human race would gain happiness only if it followed the road to socialism.
2.2. He believed that humanity would gain happiness only if it followed the nroad to socialism.
3.1. It may be said that the paper has become a truly national publication.
3.2. It may be said that the paper has grown into a truly national publication.
Thank you for your efforts.
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